Can someone read my Princeton supplement essay?

[ozball14]

<p>Made a first draft, but I'm far from satisfied w/ it. Could someone help me edit it/point out some changes, or make sure i'm on the right track?
Thanks!</p>

[OnMyWay2013]

<p>I can!</p>

[nycutie786]

<p>I can</p>

[capitalamerica]

<p>I will.</p>

[Hummergal]

<p>Sure, pm me we can help each other out :)</p>

[frostyy]

<p>I’ll read it if you want</p>

[downtownbook]

<p>I’ll take a look!</p>

[teastraw]

<p>dude message me that I’m working on my own draft too.</p>

[UMTYMP2015]

<p>I’d love to take a look.</p>

[Audrae]

<p>I can read it and tell you what I think.</p>

[oreogirl12]

<p>I would be willing to help! :)</p>

[germanyrocks]

<p>yeah sure I’ll read it. </p>

[880818]

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

[TheLoschadka]

<p>Go for it :)</p>