Can someone read my rough draft?

[SomethingWithin]

<p>It's a bit over the word limit, but I can shorten it just hoping this is what colleges are looking for and if it makes me stand out.</p>

[germanyrocks]

<p>yeah sure I’ll read it</p>

[KaranMIT]

<p>Sure</p>

[NCgirl2015]

<p>I will if you read mine. PM it to me!</p>

[bessoe]

<p>sure pm it</p>