Can someone read my Why Duke? essay?

<p>I'm applying Early Decision and would like someone (preferably a Duke student or alumni) to read my essay and tell me what, if anything I could do to improve it.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I’m a current student so I could give it a shot, I suppose. I don’t know how helpful I’ll be though :P</p>

<p>I’ll take a look n try to help u out!</p>

<p>i’m not a duke student, but PM me if u want.</p>

<p>Hello I would be more than happy to help you. Send it to me and I’ll take a look and make comments for you! </p>

<p>Thanks,
Duke alumni '07</p>

<p>^LOL @ how sketchy this guy is.</p>

<p>I’d be a little wary sending my essay to a stranger. Isn’t there anyone in your community who could help you with it? Even if it isn’t a Duke grad there must be someone around from a top tier school who could give you an opinion. Good luck to you.</p>