Can someone read one of my personal statements? (what will you bring)

Colleges & Universities A-Z University of California - Berkeley
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<p>this is the 1st of the 3</p>

<p>all i ask for is brutal honesty</p>

<p>thanks <3</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>sure, i'll read</p>

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<p>I will also read, no problem.</p>

<p><3,</p>

<p>Izzie Bear</p>

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<p>i will read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it and give my humble opinions haha</p>

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<p>It is very good. The beginning was good; it captured my attention. The middle was somewhat cliche. "Equipped with my..." You can probably change this sentence into something less cliche. The ending was good.</p>

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<p>ome2me2me2</p>

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<p>sure.....ill read it.</p>

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<p>I'll read it too</p>

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<p>I'll help too....</p>

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<p>sure, i'll read it</p>

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<p>ill read it!</p>

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<p>Please send me! adnan(dot)esmail(at)gmail(dot)com</p>

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<p>yup pm me!</p>

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<p>ill help..PM it over</p>