Can someone review and evaluate my appeal letter for UCLA?

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I’m planning to appeal the rejection letter from UCLA for Fall 2018. Would someone read my letter and evaluate it?

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I’ll send a letter via email.

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will not read but if you tell me your main points ill see if I can help. make sure you edit edit edit since portal doesnt open for another week and then you’ll still have two weeks to submit (if they follow same timeline as last year). I submitted April one and did not hear back until mid may, submitting early doesnt help since they only consider after deadline to submit passes

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hey jiiik237,
in one of your threads you said that you came to the united states when you were about ten. So did i. i also notice that u were accepted to Cornell(my dream school). did you write about ur “migration to the us” in college essay? do u think coming to the U.S. at that age helped you get in in any way, shape or form? hope you answer.