can u edit an essay?

Applying to College
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<p>i wrote an essay for transfer (in addition to the why__? essays) that's supposed to be a more free-lance, creative supplement. i was wondering if anyone would be willing to give me feedback and specific areas i need to work on. i'd really appreciate it, and will PM the essay. (if zantedeschia, claysoul, searchingavalon, and other experts are around, that would be awesome)</p>