Cannot decide between which essay to choose. Anybody eager to help?

Hi everyone,

as I have mentioned in the topic, I have written two essays, but cannot make a single decision. They are both about the same topic, but are written differently.

Can anyone help me? This is urgent.

Feel free to PM me if you feel the need

So nobody besides @Brajia wants to read them?
All you have to do is to read two common app essays and tell me which one is better. That’s all I’m asking.
Please, this is urgent.

I will. PM me.