cardinal

Transfer Students
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<p>your personal statement was gooood...it was like really colorful and creative...</p>

<p>do you mind looking at one of my personal statements? (the longer one)?</p>

<p>i got the sense you dont like me anymore bc of a few instances you seemed annoyed lol but yea either way hit me back with a yes or no. bye</p>

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i got the sense you dont like me anymore bc of a few instances you seemed annoyed lol but yea either way hit me back with a yes or no. bye

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<p>let's see, you bashed UCLA, right?</p>

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<p>And your "grammer" and punctuation aren't correct. He probably hates you because of that as well.</p>

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<p>why do you quote grammer as if i mispelled it....</p>

<p>and no i never bashed ucla</p>

<p>this isn't a thread dedicated to figuring out if and if so why cardinal is annoyed by me..i'm asking him a yes or no Q. peace</p>

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<p>Lax, you shouldn't begin a sentence with a conjunction.</p>

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<p>lol owned (10 char)</p>

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<p>Damn, I got owned on a forum...there really is no point in living</p>

<p>Conjunction junction</p>

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<p>Link me the threads where it seemed like I was annoyed and make an outline regarding why I seem annoyed; if you do I will check your personal statement.</p>

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Lax, you shouldn't begin a sentence with a conjunction.

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<p>This is wrong wrong wrong. Starting a sentence with a conjunction is perfectly acceptable under the right circumstances. </p>

<p><a href="http://lawprofessors.typepad.com/legalwriting/2006/10/conjunctions_to.html%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://lawprofessors.typepad.com/legalwriting/2006/10/conjunctions_to.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p><a href="http://www.grammar-monster.com/lessons/conjunctions_lessons.htm%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://www.grammar-monster.com/lessons/conjunctions_lessons.htm&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p><a href="http://www.gpuss.co.uk/english_usage/start_sentence_conjunction.htm%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://www.gpuss.co.uk/english_usage/start_sentence_conjunction.htm&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>

<p>But, in the case of Lax's post, it was probably a bit gratuitous.</p>

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why do you quote [url=<a href="http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/grammar%5Dgrammer%5B/url"&gt;http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/grammar]grammer[/url&lt;/a&gt;] as if i mispelled it....

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<p>;)</p>

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<p>what exactly is the uc's looking for in personal statement? are they looking for descriptions of academic qualities or personal life story? would it be better to write on ur characteristics potential for success (the future) or on ur past life?</p>

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<p>is uc freshmen and transfer prompt the same?</p>

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<p>lol it was just once instance when you thought i was referring to you by the title 'guy' but i was talking to someone else</p>

<p>and you rolled your eyes with those smiley things..and said "i have a name"</p>

<p>or something along those lines. i dont know which thread it was..</p>

<p>that good enough <em>smiles nervously</em></p>

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<p>sauronvoldemort..go to the uc website and read the prompts..they are a little dif for transfers bc for transfers, they ask you how you've prepared for your major and what your intended major is...</p>

<p>you can answer your own questions on the UC site or go to a workshop at your community college..</p>

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<p>aren't you a freshman?</p>

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<p>ya why (10 char)</p>

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<p>lol worry about your personal statement later (like one year from now)</p>

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<p>ILC, clear your PM space...</p>

<p>actually scratch that, just IM me whenever: duskribe</p>