Schools I’m thinking about for ED (Going to pick one eventually)
Dartmouth(my first choice right now), and (possibly) Rice, WashU, Vanderbilt
Schools I’m thinking about for EA
UMichigan, UVA, UNC-Chapel Hill
(Please give me feedback if the ED and EA schools are reaches, matches, or safeties) (honestly I think none of them are safeties)
General Info:
Asian Female
from New Jersey from a not too big city, not sure if this would give me a geographic advantage
Public School: competitive only for IB Program
Income: upper middle class
Hooks?
First Generation College
Intended Major: (basically pre-med)
Biology
GPA: 4.0 UW, 4.69 W
will get decile ranking from school district in about a week (probs top 10%)
ACT: 35(35 math,36 science,35 english,33 reading)
SAT II Math: 800
SAT II Korean: 790
Korean Test: Level 6 (Highest level)- certifies fluency for professional work
AP tests: have 1 AP score which is a 4
IB tests: IB Math (6)
Senior Courseload: mostly IB classes (took the most rigorous courses available all through high school)
EC’s (Some are pretty strong in my opinion and I think I can write about some in one of my essays) (will have to narrow the list down)
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did a lot of coding stuff- knowledge in html, Javascript, Python, and I also have a portfolio of all the coding stuff I did on my computer (is there a way I could put this in as a supplement in my application?)
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volunteer at blood donor center(200+ hours) (10th-present)
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Red Cross Field Ambassador- work closely with local chapters and clubs to develop youth programs and connect with National Youth Council for Red Cross, only 1 person gets picked per region (1 year)
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Math tutoring- paid job at math tutoring center (9th-present) (300+ hours)
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got into a Biology related research program for 1 month, kind of competitive to get in
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Shadowing- shadowed an Oral & Maxillofacial Professor (about 40 hours, could have done more but got blocked by COVID)
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Summer Internship- attending online lectures about cardiothoracic surgery and skills training
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Youth Symphony- played violin at symphony for 8 years(got canceled last year and this year because of COVID)
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Leadership- doing since 9th grade, was on ASB board for 1 year, also voted as School Site Council secretary (11th-present)
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High School Red Cross Club- Founder and Co-president, did a blood-drive
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Korean School volunteer teacher- teach little kids how to speak and write Korean and teach the culture(food, holidays, songs) (close to 400 hours)(9th-present)
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Retirement home music volunteer- volunteer with church by playing music for elderly (about 50 hours)(9th-present)
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leadership positions in some academic competition clubs at school
Awards (Nothing major unfortunately)
Presidential Volunteer Award- for volunteering as a teacher at Korean school
couple of academic competition awards at county level (been competing with school club teams since 9th grade)
Recommendations ( planning on narrowing the list down)
Counselor rec- really, really close with her - 9/10
Biology teacher- not that close but did really good in her class though (I think she writes pretty good recs because she wrote a rec for a program and I got in)- 8/10
English teacher- been pretty close since 9th grade- 8/10
Math teacher- pretty close since 9th grade- 7/10
Leadership teacher- known since 9th grade, pretty close- 8/10
Chemistry teacher - she, herself, said that she’s not good at writing recs but she wrote a rec for a program and I got in- 7/10
worker at Red Cross blood center- known me pretty well since 10th grade- said she’s not good at writing recs but will try- 7/10
Essays:
- stuff about how I was a shy kid and challenged myself by joining leadership at the start of high school and my fear of public speaking. I’d give it a 7-8/10
Why this College essay-
(Please give me ideas!!)
I REALLY REALLY love all of these schools, but I think they might be high reaches for me. I really want to apply for Dartmouth ED, but I’m not sure I’ll get in. Give me your honest opinion.
Also don’t have to worry about tuition, my parents said that they would pay for it.
Also, I wanted to ask, if someone from my school got accepted into one of those colleges but chose not to go, will that have any effect on my admission? (this might be a stupid question but I was just wondering)