<p>Any of those topics are fine if the writing is gripping. None of the four is novel, but if those are the things you are passionate about and that will let your voice shine through, then that's what you should write about. Since these are topics admissions officers have seen literally thousands of times before, you've got to really think about the most interesting way to present your stories.</p>
<p>A nit-picking point, do not refer to a "God-given" gift for music unless you're the next Yo-Yo Ma. There are lots of extraordinary musicians who apply to Yale, a number of which could go to top conservatories. You may be one of those people. If so, present you talents in a humble manner. If you're not, you'll look silly if your writing conveys that you think your talent is a God-given gift to the people. I know you're just writing a sentence summary on CC, but your language concerned me.</p>
<p>Regarding my saying that music is a god-given gift..</p>
<p>sorry about the confusion. I definitely don't want to come across as arrogant...what I was trying to say is not that i am 'God's gift' to people as far as music. Because I am a Christian, I believe that everyone has been different gifts that they can use to serve and honor Him. Because of my passion for music, I believe that I can use it to give back to God through my church offertories and other performances, and hopefully use it as a tool for God to reach and influence others.</p>
<p>IDK, maybe that would be a little too 'religious' as far as an application essay? I know many colleges are more liberal these days.</p>
<p>doctor, that's a great idea, thanks for your input. I had thought about tying in small town life and how it makes volunteering and community service especially important. Does this sound like a good idea guys?</p>
<p>perhaps the utopian essay for me would be to tie in all four topics? Any ideas on how I would tie in my achievements that don't involve volunteering like my sports? I think I can tie in the first three pretty comfortably, but i'm not sure how to tie in sports, other than that the qualities and character traits that I have acquired from being on a team has helped me to model them towards the community?</p>
<p>Thanks again, all of you. YOu're a great help.</p>