<p>I'd like to get some last minute feedback on my essay. Claremont Mckenna is one of my top choices, and I would be set if I could just get accepted! My grades and SAT are decent, and I know the essay is the deciding point for admissions officers. This is just the supplement to my Common App essays, so please help! Here's the prompt:</p>
<p>Leadership is a constant theme and emphasis at CMC. In fact, one of the ways we describe CMC students is "Leaders in the Making." Choose someone, fictional or nonfictional, historical or contemporary, whom you consider to be a leader. Suppose you are this person's primary advisor. How would you advise this person and why?</p>
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