College Essay Revising Help

<p>Hey guys,
I needed a fresh pair of eyes to read my college essay! I'm applying to the University Honors Program at University of Alabama-Birmingham. The prompt goes: What intrigues you? Describe a particular work of art, a scientific achievement, a place you have been to or seen depicted, a piece of literature, a film, a class assignment, or some other object or event that falls outside this list, and explain its significance to you.
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