College is like a box of chocolate too huh? Critique my essay please

College Essays
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<p>This is my Common Apps essay. I'd be grateful if someone can critique it for me. Thanks!</p>

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<p>but I can read it if you want and give feedback. 09’er, but app has been mailed</p>

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<p>I can read it. :)</p>

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<p>i’ll read it, dreaded 09, but sent out my ED app last night!</p>