Common App Essay Critique

<p>Hello all !!</p>

<p>Would someone please take the time to read my common app essay on failure ? I really hoping to get my essays done during the summer so this would be very helpful. I'll be PM you my essay. </p>

<p>Thanks !</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>I can read it.</p>

<p>ill read it pm me :)</p>

<p>Anyone else ? Please (:</p>

<p>I can read it!:)</p>

<p>Me too! PM me!:D</p>

<p>Just PM it to me.</p>

<p>i’ll read it</p>

<p>I can read it :)</p>

<p>You don’t have enough posts to PM…</p>

<p>Ill read it</p>

<p>Yeah, I will as well.</p>

<p>Yus. Pm me</p>

<p>I can read it. PM me.</p>

<p>If you need, I will read</p>

<p>I’ll read it and give feedback :)</p>

<p>I can read it! pm me instantly!</p>

<p>I will read it if you want</p>