Common App Essay review from those bored in a cafe? please?

<p>hello all. i just finished my common app essay and i'd like some fresh objective eyes to view it. it's about 600 words. please leave your e-mail address so i can e-mail you the word document (preferred). otherwise, i'll just pm it to you :) . thanksss!</p>

<p>NO-ONE IS EVER BORED IN THE CAFE! Go to the essay forum.</p>

<p>Errr, I'd prefer that you PMed it to me.
I've already finished all of my apps + was accepted early to a college, so you don't have to worry about me copying it. =P</p>