<p>can someone please edit my common app essay? it's kinda long - 811 words. let me know if ur up for it!!!!</p>
<p>I will read it.BUT it must be catchy and interesting or else!!!.HaHa just kidding…PM it to me and i would be honest about it.</p>
<p>hey fredkay would you mind reading mine too??
thanks…</p>