Common App Essay

<p>Would someone be willing to read and critique my common app essay?
I'll pm it over if anyone is willing.
Thanks, I really appreciate it!</p>

<p>I’ll read it!</p>

<p>Thank you so much! I sent it in an email because apparantly I am not allowed to pm anyone</p>

<p>Same here! I replied to you via email.</p>

<p>I’ll read it aswell!</p>