<p>Hi Everyone!
I'm looking to make my common app essay as strong as possible and I would love the advice and feedback from some readers! I can pm it over to anyone willing to read. Thanks in advance if you can help out!</p>
<p>I would gladly read it. </p>
<p>I’ll read it too. :)</p>
<p>You’ll get a lot more responses if you post this in the “College Essays” forum. Also, you should only send your essay to trusted, high-post-count (500+) members to ensure helpfulness and security.</p>