<p>I'm hopelessly lost. My essay is completely an anecdote that reveals a little about my drive and persistence. However, the ones I've been reading are much more description-oriented and focus on specific accomplishments/positions held.</p>
<p>Should I shift the focus more toward the EC or just leave it as a self-reflection?</p>
<p>Sorry if I'm not making sense. Just ask and I'll try to clarify.</p>