<p>The prompt is "In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities" (150 word limit)</p>
<p>im not sure if I wrote this essay write. some people have told me to write creatively while others have recommended a report of my awards and experiences. </p>
<p>Any one want to read my essay?</p>
<p>anyone? please!</p>
<p>hey, i see you posted on my thread.
seems like we're not applying to the same colleges..
wanna swap? pm me</p>
<p>I would be willing to critique your essay. Just send me a pm.</p>
<p>i'll read it.</p>
<p>Feel free to PM me.</p>
<p>Since it's only limited to 150 words, it should be a nice concise("short and sweet") summary of your activity. I'd recommend not listing the awards and experiences - basically all the boring facts - in this short paragraph since they will all be listed on your resume anyway. For those who are not writing their long essay about their EC, it's a good/only opportunity to truly show their passion in their activity with their own VOICE. Sure, it couldn't hurt to be creative, but I'm not really sure what you mean by that - If you feel like you want another advice, I'll take a look.</p>
<p>Never waste an opportunity to reveal "who" you are. They ask for most meaningful...they want to know why and how it is meaningful.</p>
<p>I'll read it. Just pm me.</p>
<p>sure please PM!</p>
<p>Sure, PM me :)</p>