[aB][asize=4][acolor=#008000]Decision: Accepted[/color][/size]**
Name of Cornell College you applied to: CAS (notified by likely letter)
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2300 780 WR, 740 M, 780 CR
ACT (breakdown):n/a
SAT II: 750 E-Bio, 760 US History, 700 Math 2
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.81 (had some b’s) 4.36 W
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A, probably top ten
AP (place score in parenthesis): US history (5), Art History (5), Eng Lang (5), Bio (4), AP Enviro, AP Lit + Comp, AP Calc AB, AP Poli Sci, AP Econ
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: 4 APs and honors class
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): AP Scholar w/ honors, National novel writing award, national merit commended, people to people international award (not that important), online writing awards, sports awards
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
Varsity soccer and track (4 years + sprints captain),
Gender-sexuality alliance (pres + founder),
National novel writing month(s) -( won an award for this) -
Editor and writer of student-run lit magazine,
People to People Student Ambassadors,
Junior classical league (just a member),
Published on juke pop novels website + articles in Diverse Voices Quarterly, Blue Pencil and Teen Ink -
I also did a lot of club sports and got state/regional recognition. Not recruited though.
Job/Work Experience: N/A
Volunteer/Community service: LGBT Center OC, Heifer International, Hands for Africa, Food Bank, Gay for Good
Summer Activities: Stanford Summer College (took writing and sociology classes) - As in both, People to People Student International Trip to Italy Spain and France, travelled to Tanzania one year and track-trained for one.
Essays: common app is 10/10 - I wrote about how my afro helped me come out of the closet
Cornell supplement: talked about my love for personification and story-telling and how this idea intersects with science and education (super creative and I was specific to Cornell institutes)
Teacher Recommendation:
Art History teacher: 10/10 I participated a lot in her class and she really liked me + Art history was my favorite subjects last year
Bio teacher: probably 7-8/10 because I did well in his class but I wasn’t his favorite student or anything, but I stand out a lot in general.
Counselor Rec: Ehh… I would say 8-9/10 because I stand out a lot among my class and I had a really good interview with her but she has so many students so I’m not really sure.
Additional Rec: Fiction writing professor from stanford: 10/10 - I talked to her a lot over the summer and she helped me edit/polish a lot of my creative writing work. She knows me very well.
Interview: N/A
Other
I submitted a resume because common app didn’t let me put everything down.
Applied for Financial Aid?: marked yes but ended up not applying.
Intended Major: English
State (if domestic applicant): CA
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: SUPER competitive public school probably will work against me.
Ethnicity: I’m mixed - half Nigerian and half American (so I put down African-American)
Gender: XX
Income Bracket: ~200k
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): URM, I’m not sure being queer counts but I emphasized that too in my app.
Reflection
Strengths: ESSAYS ESSAYS ESSAYS - if the rest of my app wasn’t strong enough, my essays got me a second chance. SAT scores and unique extracurriculars - but honestly i think my essays played the biggest part.
What you tried to focus on in your application - any hooks you tried to make for yourself: QWOC who wants to be a writer? Idk.
Weaknesses: GPA probably, not a lot of super prestigious awards, super competitive class, and probably the common app activities section. My resume probably gave me a boost on that, and I have a lack of work experience.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Essays, unique ECS, prevalent academic focus
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: dunno yet! waiting on some of the ivies! I really want to get into schools like Upenn and Columbia because I prefer urban settings but if they don’t work out Cornell is great to fall back on! So far I’ve gotten in to UC Santa Barbara, university of san francisco and UC Santa Cruz.
Your “Big Red” factor - the most unique thing in your application: … Probably just getting a second look because my essays are pretty good, but I don’t know. College admissions are part crapshoot.