could any accepted student please look over my essay?

<p>I really need someone's feedback on my Gtown essays - one general and one for SFS. You dont have to read both if you dont want to. I just need some opinions.</p>

<p>I was accepted EA and would be glad to give them a read!</p>

<p>My D was accepted EA also, so I/she would be happy to look at yours.</p>

<p>If you still want an extra set of eyes feel free to send them my way. I was accepted to SFS EA!</p>

<p>I sent you all a copy but because the message center is doing weird things and does not show anything in “sent,” please let me know if you have not received my Pvt. Messages. Thanks again.</p>