Could anyone read my supplement essay?

<p>William and Mary is my top choice, and I just finished my supplement. The question is along the lines of: beyond academics and extracurriculars, what makes you colorful/unique? </p>

<p>I had fun writing my response, and the format is a bit risky I guess? I feel like it's either great, or I'm going to have to start over. Hopefully the former, rather than the latter.</p>

<p>So yeah, if anyone's interested, I'd really appreciate it :)</p>

<p>you can send it to me</p>

<p>thank you :)</p>

<p>Hey, I can take a look!</p>

<p>You can PM me</p>

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