Could someone look over my essay?

Applying to College
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Its not a normal essay, it is pretty specialized because of what I do. I run an online business that has been highly successful and wrote about it. Would some people be willing to take a look at it and give me some suggestions? Please post your email addresses.

Thanks

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<p>I'd be willing to take a look.</p>

<p>matthew.huang at gmail.com</p>

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<p>Since posting emails is not allowed, please just private message me.</p>