Could someone please read my common app essays?

<p>Could someone please read over my essays for the common application and give me their feedback? I would very much appreciate it. I have not yet shown them to anyone and given that the deadline is tomorrow, I want to make sure that I did not make any blunders.
Thank you.</p>

<p>If you still want input, feel free to send your essay to me in a pm.
Good luck!</p>