Could someone read my common app essay?

College Essays
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<p>I finished the first draft of my common app essay, and I'd appreciate it if someone could read it for me, and tell me your thoughts. :)</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I am a parent, happy to read and give feedback.</p>

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<p>I am a parent .PM me if you are interested to send.I will be happy to give my feedback</p>

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<p>PM Me Yo</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look</p>