<p>Anyone willing to read and critique and leave feedback? It would be very much appreciated. It's only around 1200 characters and spaces.</p>
<p>sure, send it over. 10char…</p>
<p>Anyone willing to read and critique and leave feedback? It would be very much appreciated. It's only around 1200 characters and spaces.</p>
<p>sure, send it over. 10char…</p>