<p>Hey, I have 2 essays, and in one of them I keep changing one to two paragraphs around to fit in the topic which is quite similar. I would really appreciate it, if someone wouldn't mind looking at a couple of essays that I have written.<br>
-Tushar</p>
<p>please, would someone look at them?</p>
<p>Please send them, I'd be glad to give some feedback.</p>