Critique my ED CALS AEM Essay!!!!!

<p>Hi I am applying Early Decision to Cornell's CALS AEM major! I really really want to attend! I just wrote my essay! Would anybody be able to read it and give me some honest feedback? I will PM you just post in this thread! Thanks! It isn't took long, under 500 words!</p>

<p>I’m still revising mine but I’ll read yours. What are your stats btw?</p>

<p>I’ll take a look & comment on it if you’d like. I was originally planning on AEM, but dropped it. Sure, I’ll still take a look if you’d like. PM Me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it and give you feedback</p>

<p>-tay2pay</p>

<p>i’ll read it too!</p>

<p>i’ll read it =)</p>

<p>pm me, i’ll give feedback!</p>

<p>heads up: might not want to send it to EVERYONE. it might be smart to make sure they’re current students already.</p>

<p>Yeah I know, I am only willing to send it to current students, alumni, or parents… gotta check you out first =]</p>

<p>boo! i’m not applying to CALS or wanting to pursue anything even CLOSE to AEM… english at the way! haha</p>

<p>^^^ yo but I dont believe in people stealing ideas from others this way. Does it really happen? they are digging their own grave by doing it and they know it right ? :smiley: :D</p>

<p>Hey, i’m a current AEM sophomore. I’d be happy to help you out.</p>

<p>current students are strongly preferred!!</p>

<p>ill read it</p>

<p>Hey, I’m also applying early decision to AEm…lol SO you should probably not let me see your essay, but it’s nice to know i’m not alone. Are you also applying to other schools EA? I am, U Chicago and U of Notre Dame.</p>

<p>^^^ you’re not allowed to apply ED to Cornell AND EA to other schools… only schools with rolling admissions.</p>