Critique my UC essays please? I have a unique and interesting topic for you to read

<p>My essays are fairly polished right now with extremely minimal/no grammatical mistakes. Would someone be kind enough to read my second prompt through and give me some feedback on the content itself? I'll PM my essay to you if you'd like to read it. Thanks so much! :)</p>

<p>id like to read! :D</p>

<p>I can read it :slight_smile: PM me for my email</p>

<p>i’ll read it! :smiley: Please pm it to me!</p>

<p>I’ll read it :D</p>

<p>Wow, and only one year late. Good job. :D</p>

<p>Sure, PM it to me.</p>