Critique Personal Statement

<p>I need someone to critique my personal statement. I thought I had a sudden source of inspiration for it, but now I realize that my topic may have been a bad idea. I'm just wondering if I should just scrap the essay entirely. If anyone could give me some advice, I'd be grateful. I'll PM you the essay. Thanks again.</p>

<p>I’ll help! Pm me :)</p>

<p>just pm it over!</p>

<p>Aren’t you guys both in high school? I don’t mean to be picky, but I’d prefer someone who is a college student or grad.</p>