I wrote one of the essays earlier but I feel like the topic isn’t interesting/ it isn’t written well or personally enough. I have a whole new draft for a different prompt which I like more so far, but I’m not sure if it would work better than the first one. It also needs some work both style wise and for idea development (and it goes over the word limit). Anyway, if anyone would be willing to read both essays and let me know which one you like better/offer general feedback on them let me know! Thanks in advance 
I am also a high school student. However I have already submitted most of my applications and think I have a good feel for what they are looking for. Feel free to pm me