<p>I'm trying to figure out whether the supplemental essay was the problem with my app, and if I should write a new one or make adjustments accordingly. Critiques - harsh if necessary - would be appreciated.</p>
<p>I can read it 
I guess you’re not comfortable to share it with other 2014ers but I was admitted SCEA, so the whole process is over for me.</p>
<p>I would be happy to look over it. Though, I don’t think they will let you resubmit your essay (Of course, I could be wrong).</p>
<p>Yeah, I should have been more specific - this is to revise the essay for other schools, not for Yale.</p>
<p>bump more replies appreciated</p>
<p>Sure! I’d love to help you out!</p>
<p>Sometimes I talk through my hat, but I <em>might</em> have an idea of what to do for these. </p>
<p>-'14 Yalie!!!</p>
<p>I’d love to read it. I’m deferred, too, so no way I will steal your essay!</p>
<p>I can read it - I already applied SCEA and sent in all my other apps already. Just Pm :P</p>