Diversity essay, need help

<p>I have an essay about diversity that was for the University of Maryland College Park, but I plan to use the basic idea for other essays because many college ask for it. For this reason, I need it to be good. Respond if you want to read and critique it, and I'll PM it to you.</p>

<p>please help, this essay will be very important on later applications.</p>

<p>i can help...</p>