Does this essay topic fit the prompt for option 2?

Colleges and Universities A-Z Princeton University
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<p>I am having trouble coming up with a topic for my Princeton supplemental essay. I have an idea that I like, but am not sure whether it will work. Here is the prompt:</p>

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<li>Using the statement below as a starting point, tell us about an event or experience that helped you define one of your values or changed how you approach the world</li>
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<p>“Princeton in the Nation’s Service” was the title of a speech given by Woodrow Wilson on the 150th anniversary of the University. It became the unofficial Princeton motto and was expanded for the University’s 250th anniversary to “Princeton in the nation’s service and in the service of all nations.”
--Woodrow Wilson, Princeton Class of 1879, served on the faculty and was Princeton’s president from 1902–1910.</p>

<p>I couldn't think of any single experience that had a really major impact on me, but something that HAS had an impact on me is the fact that my dad's in the military. I was thinking of using the moment when my dad took the oath of office to join the military as my "event". Then, the rest of the essay would be about how being a military brat has affected my life. Of course, the "event" didn't occur during my lifetime. I'm not sure whether the admissions officers will regard this as interesting or stupid. Any thoughts? Thanks!</p>

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<p>It’s a bit of a stretch. I wouldn’t do it.</p>

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<p>why do you say that?
I mean, it could be interesting. I would start the essay by quoting the oath. you know, the “I will uphold the constitution,” etc. Then I would be like “Although my father spoke these words before I was born, they would prove to have a profound affect on my life and the way in which i approach it” Then tell why. Idk, its iffy.</p>

<p>any other thoughts?</p>

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<p>I suggest that you reply to the “experience that helped you define one of your values”. Watching your father serve the nation is your experience. Most young men see their father as their role model. If you have traveled overseas and lived on military bases then your experience was longer and perhaps more profound that an applicant that writes about working in Haiti for two weeks. If you are planning to major in the Woodrow Wilson School there is a natural tie to national service.</p>

<p>If you plan to be a classics major then you would need to explain why his service has inspired this choice.</p>