Edit my Personal Statements? :)

Transfer Students UC Transfers
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<p>Would anyone be willing to look over my personal statements and give me their opinion on them? Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure I will help you. Bro</p>

3

<p>I will help you but please do not be offended if I appear to be brash in my criticism. I am ultimately trying to help you get into college.</p>

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<p>UCLA english major here. PM me natasharose</p>

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<p>I will. PM if still interested.</p>