Emory Scholars Essay Critique

<p>Is anybody willing to read my Emory Scholars Essay? If you're not familiar with the program the prompt is as follows :</p>

<p>*Write a brief essay (750 words) about yourself focusing on 1 or 2 of your intellectual interests. Talk about how they enhance your life and relate to your interests and activities.
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Tell me if you're interested and I'll pm you my essay!</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>Ask a friend, teacher, school counsellor, or family member, but do NOT post this online. You don’t know who is reading your essay, their qualifications, and their motivations. Pick someone you know is thoughtful, thorough, and has good command of the english language. Most importantly, pick someone you trust.</p>

<p>(Emory '13)</p>

<p>ill read your essay…i submitted a Emory Scholar app too…</p>

<p>I’d be willing to give your essay a read.</p>

<p>I am willing.</p>