Essay about my reality show experience

<p>I just finished my common app essay, and was wondering if anyone could look it over. It’s a bit long (932 words) but not a laborious read. Non-high schoolers preferred, and I would appreciate quick turnaround because I’m planning to submit in the next few hours. Thanks.</p>

<p>Scratch that. Decided to use a different essay that’s already been read over by a few friends. Nevermind. :)</p>