Essay about "setback"

heres the prompt:

Describe a setback or ethical dilemma that you have faced. How did you resolve it? How did the outcome affect you? If something similar happened in the future, how would you react?

Here’s what i’m writing about in my essay:
Moving to America – reluctance to speak english because of fear of public speaking (especially since english is not my native language) and mispronunciation of words, etc. – overcoming the fear, speaking perfectly fine english, doing good in debate.

what do u think? relevant topic? too cliched?

<p>it maybe a cliche topic but it's all about the delivery</p>

<p>essay for umich?</p>

<p>Read the essay advice on the parents forum</p>

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