Essay criticism please. Can some parents help as well?

Colleges & Universities A-Z Harvard University
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<p>Hi.</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read an essay of mine that I will probably add as the optional essay for Harvard EA.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

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<p>Sure, I'll read it.</p>

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<p>Email (<a href="mailto:Sun.Albert@gmail.com">Sun.Albert@gmail.com</a>) or PM it to me, I'll read it.</p>

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<p>Ich auch. <a href="mailto:tkm256@adelphia.net">tkm256@adelphia.net</a></p>

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<p>i'll take a look if you want to PM it to me</p>

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<p>wow, you've written another essay? i'll read it!</p>

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<p>i'll read it. PM me.</p>

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<p>i'll take a look</p>

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<p>I'll take a look also. (<a href="mailto:legendofthewarrior@gmail.com">legendofthewarrior@gmail.com</a>)</p>