<p>I'll take the first three people who are willing to give an honest, quality critique. I reallly need it. </p>
<p>PM me!</p>
<p>Please PM me with your essay and I will happily give you feedback. Thanks!</p>
<p>I’ll read it!</p>
<p>Thanks, guys. I’ve got three now! Thanks for all your help :)</p>
<p>ill read it</p>