Essay editing, please?

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone be willing to read my essay for Harvey Mudd and give me suggestions on how I can improve it/make sure I'm on the right track/etc.?</p>

<p>Here is the prompt:
What influenced you to apply to Harvey Mudd College? What about the HMC curriculum and community appeals to you? (500 word limit)</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>I can read through it.</p>

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<p>Ah thank you! Is it okay if I email it to you?</p>