Essay for my #1 Choice...I'm scared to submit it

College Essays
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<p>I really want to get this essay right. Is anyone willing to read it and critique? Here is the prompt:
The quality of Rice's academic life and the Residential College System are heavily influenced by the unique life experiences and cultural traditions each student brings. What personal perspective do you feel that you will contribute to life at Rice? </p>

<p>PM me or post here if you can look it over. Thanks!</p>

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<p>My Dad was the Valedictorian at Rice his year. I’d be happy to look it over if you’d like.</p>

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<p>I’d like to get as many opinions as possible. Anyone else willing to help?</p>

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<p>yes, i’d like to read it.</p>

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<p>I can help you read it if you want me to.</p>

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<p>Thanks all of you. I like getting different opinions. The more the merrier.</p>