Essay help! Anyone?

<p>Would someone please read my essays? I wrote a couple, but can't decide which one to send. Any criticism is appreciated. Thanks guys!
Oh, and only people who have already gotten into Columbia, please. Thanks!</p>

<p>Well my sister just got into Columbia and I’m sure she’d love to read them. PM them over!</p>

<p>Does your sister have an account? Sorry to seem suspicious, I just want to make sure there’s no plagiarism or anything.</p>

<p>If you’re really concerned about plagiarism, don’t PM them to anyone. People could theoretically lie and say they were accepted when they really weren’t. Either put the paranoia to rest or only show your essay to people in person.</p>

<p>No she doesn’t have an account. She got in, and I’m a freshman in high school, you can see all of my other posts that ask questions and such. But if you’re worried about plagiarism, then don’t send them. I would understand your hesitancy, but my sister is still glad to look at them. (Btw, I could’ve just straight out lied and said that I was the one that got in, and you probably would’ve sent them over, but I didn’t because I was trying to be honest.)</p>

<p>I’ll read it. I applied already, everything is sent in.</p>

<p>ill read em. :)</p>