Essay help? Would somebody mind reading my two essays?

College Essays
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<p>I'm applying to the University of Wisconsin--Madison and am having trouble with my essays.
One of them is something that goes unnoticed and why its important to you.
The other is why I decided to apply and what I'm going to do there and if anything has impacted my choices.</p>

<p>Would somebody mind reading through my drafts, please?</p>

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<p>Please?
10 char.</p>

3

<p>i can take a look over them. Just PM me them.</p>

4

<p>Bump?
10 char.</p>

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<p>Please?
10 char.</p>

6

<p>I don’t mind looking at them!</p>

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<p>I don’t mind reading them! PM me. :)</p>