hey guys! is there anyone that would be willing to read my essay I wrote for common app? I’m not the best writer and some tips really would be nice. I just need to know if I should add anything or even retype it and get a new subject! please help if you can 
I can read and critique it if you PM me!
Sure xD
sure pm me
Sure pm me 
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