<p>Hello! I am in the process of applying for transfer admission to several schools, and was wondering if anyone would mind reading over one of my personal statements and providing me with some feedback. I've already had a few people in the transfer forum read it, but I'm just trying to get as many perspectives as I can.</p>
<p>Prompt: In reading your application we want to get to know you as well as we can. We ask that you use this opportunity to tell us something more about yourself that would help us toward a sense of who you are, how you think, and what issues and ideas interest you most.</p>
<p>Thanks! If interested, let me know and I'll PM it.</p>