<p>I was wondering if a few parents would be willing to help me revise my essay. I have had a few peers look at it and I think I am almost ready to turn it in, but I would really appreciate if some adults looked at it. Thanks in advance!!</p>
<p>Anyone? Please</p>
<p>OK, PM me. I'll give you an honest opinion.</p>
<p>I can take a look at it & give you some thoughts, if you'd like.</p>
<p>bump. no response yet</p>