Essay topic choice?

<p>While finishing up my essays after extensive revision from my english teachers, I'm starting to doubt if the topic I picked for Apply texas' Topic B was a good idea. I wrote about the problems of students, specifically me, regarding the expenses of college and higher education. I mentioned pharmacy school and my position as a lower-middle class from an immigrant family, too.
Does that make me seem like someone desperate for scholarships or portray me in a negative light? My brother came in and asked about it and that's exactly what he told me, which just adds to my doubt that I picked a good topic...</p>