Feedback and criticism needed for UIUC essay!

College Essays
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<p>I'm working on one of my University of Illinois essays and would really love if someone could give me feedback and criticism on what I have so far! Thanks!</p>

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<p>yeah sure!-- pm me asap,
I’ll critique yours, and you critique mine?</p>

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<p>Thanks for the help mcgillian2014! Anyone else willing to offer opinions?</p>

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<p>Bump .</p>

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<p>I will look it over, if you can take a look at mine for NYU</p>

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<p>I will look over it as well if you can look at mine (also for UIUC)</p>

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<p>I will look over it as well if you can look at mine (also for UIUC)</p>